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gone, gone, everything is gone
even the nightmares have left me to go on
all alone


slice, slice, everything is silent
even the shadows leave me in the darkness
to fend for myself


done, finished, tired of trying
too hard to find something that will fight to revive me!
too hard to find something that just isn't there!


insult, injury, there is no hope
no one to save me, no way to cope
even my closest friends are now strangers


liar, liar, you promised you'd be there!
but you're just like the rest - pretending you cared!
and, just like the rest, you've left me as well.


i climb.
i slip.
i fall.
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Well, this is the first time in forever I've written poetry...:ohnoes: It's just something I came up with at 1:00 in the morning. -.-
I don't know where this came from..I'm kind of happier now more than I used to be..so, yeah. I'm okay. ^-^
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~Sonataa Aug 26, 2012  Student Writer
I love the emotion in this :) With some editing it could be a really great piece.
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~The-Willow-Gray Aug 19, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Hm. I like it! Sounds a little hopeless, but, then, I write poetry about death, so, I'd be a little hypocritical in saying as such.
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~CrazyRandomWaffles Aug 20, 2012  Student Photographer
Well, thank you :meow: I was going for a "hopeless mood" to the poem, so thanks for saying so! ^-^
I usually write poetry about death too, so :D
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~The-Willow-Gray Aug 21, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
^-^
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Mood: Love ~Blonndie96 Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Even though you said you eel better, I'm going to go ahead & say this. When youre sad & feel like you have nothing or that everything had been taken from you,you will still be a great photographer & thats not something anyone can change <3
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~CrazyRandomWaffles Aug 18, 2012  Student Photographer
Awh, thank you! :huggle:
That means a lot ^-^
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~Blonndie96 Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
No problem, keep up the awesome art! :)
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When you read it, I just love the...rhythm? I don't know exactly, but I love it^^
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~CrazyRandomWaffles Aug 18, 2012  Student Photographer
Thank you :tighthug:
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No problem! (:
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